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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 54

Chapter 54: Simon “How did this happen?” she had asked.  This woman who had come from nowhere and who carried a sadness and vulnerability with her that he recognised only too well.  The stoop of her shoulders and her limp lack-lustre hair … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 53

Chapter 53: Dee Why she did it, she wasn’t sure.  It felt like a betrayal of the one friend she had in the world but she had felt a desperate need to know her enemy.  A need to understand this man who … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 52

Chapter 52: Isla Following Simon’s threats and after much agonising, Isla felt that she and baby Milly would be safer if they stayed rather than trying to escape, and so Isla turned her mind to working out how to make … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 51

Chapter 51: Dee Of course, Dee knew none of Isla, Milly and Simon’s history as she researched the numbers and locations of local refuges.  She had no idea that Isla believed that the only way to keep her daughter safe was … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 50

Chapter 50: Isla After many hours of solace and pain, once Simon had arrived, Isla had laboured more easily. Her hand held by a kind and loving man – or at least by a man who was being kind and … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 49

Chapter 49: Dee The days spent in the hospital had proven hugely restorative for Dee.  She had a feeling of purpose that had been absent from her life for as long as she could remember.  She felt that it was her job … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 48

Chapter 48: Isla With each day of her pregnancy, Isla felt a little stronger.  Although she was physically battered and bruised, she felt mentally strong.  She was fighting not for herself, for whom she had little remaining fire, but for the new … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 47

Chapter 47: Dee Whilst Isla and Milly slept, Dee planned.  She had walked into the hospital with her only friend, uncertain what she would find and uncertain too about what the future held for all three of them.  She was no surer … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapter 46

Chapter 46: Isla Periodically, Isla would open her eyes and surface for a moment.  Each time she did so, she noted that Dee was still sat at Milly’s bedside, holding her hand and that Milly was still there, still clinging on … Continue reading

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Read and feedback as I write a novel: Imperception – Chapters 43, 44 & 45

Chapter 43: Dee Dee did not know how many hours she had spent at the station but the rush hour had come and gone.  Tired from her sleepless night, she had been dozing when Isla finally arrived, waking with a start … Continue reading

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