I say that I don’t need you,
I can do this on my own,
But in truth, I’ll struggle
If I haven’t yet been shown.
But I’m too proud to say so,
I’ll attempt it anyway,
And when I make a mess of it,
My mood will shift to grey.
I’ll sulk and stamp and caterwaul,
Upset I’ve got it wrong,
But still too proud to ask for help
I needed all along.
The thing is, Mum, I’m five-years-old
So I can be excused,
For showing signs of needing help,
And yet that help’s refused.
But what then, Mum, is your excuse?
You’ve lived and learnt and grown,
But still refuse kind helping hands
And battle on alone.
Ouf! this one went straight to the heart. Hope you are well, Happy Christmas to you and your family…your adorable wee girls:) Cheryl-Lynn
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Thank you. And to you and yours x
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wow! these lines really got to me “But what then, Mum, is your excuse?
You’ve lived and learnt and grown,
But still refuse kind helping hands
And battle on alone”
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I swear my five year old is my life coach. I’ve paraphrased her ut this is just what she said!
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I liked this poem.. Yu/stan/kema
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Lovely poem, how true it is of the struggle to maintain independence in the face of difficult if not insurmountable conditions.
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