A Problem Shared

She needed help,
But she knew not who to ask,
How to ask,
Whether to ask…
Would she be dismissed,
Judged as incomplete,
A failure?
And so she remained mute,
For days,
Then weeks,
Then months.
Until one day,
The words tumbled forth,
Unrehearsed and jumbled.
Nervously, she raised her gaze
To meet her confidante’s.
She saw no judgement,
Only care,
And all at once,
She felt a little less alone.

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14 Responses to A Problem Shared

  1. Kip says:

    Brilliant, beautiful!

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  2. OnTheWay... says:

    I only hope that one day this can be the case for me too.

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  3. topazo says:

    everyone needs a confidant…where there is no judgement, only safety

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  4. It’s in the moment of confidence where you share those hidden intimate feelings that you realise you are not alone. Well written Pooky.
    Is you anthology going to be available in ibooks?

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  5. Locely poem about courage. Xx

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  6. johncoyote says:

    A positive ending to the poem. All of need someone to give us a hand and kindness.

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  7. A lovely poem and comforting for anyone who fears they are alone.

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