Today’s prompt is to write a poem in which the first phrase is also the last phrase.
You might like to consider:
- Should you use the phrase just twice or elsewhere in the poem too – if so, where?
- Should you choose a phrase with multiple meanings or just one?
- Should the repetition of the phrase be integral to your poem or almost coincidental?
- Should you use a long or short phrase?
- Should the phrase make up a whole line, or part of a line?
- Should the phrase have the same meaning in the first line and last line?
Today’s highlighted poem is The Fallen Sky by Serena Malcolm over at Voiceless Fricative. It’s about a moment of clarity and it really got me thinking! I hope you like it too.
Happy reading, happy writing -and if you do write, don’t forget to post your poem (in full or as a link) in the comments below so we can all enjoy it.
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Hi Pooky another great prompt. Here is my effort:
great effort, I particularly enjoyed this one, something we can all identify with!
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I can only agree! An amazing prompt, and another chance for me to try my favourite form: http://ccchampagne.wordpress.com/2014/05/08/on-a-rainy-day-remember/
Oooh I love this form!
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A great prompt, not so “challenging” as some 😉 I enjoyed creating this:
I thought maybe your brain could do with a rest, you’ve been working hard 😉
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When screaming and tearing at hair, just remember that you DID ask for it!
Oh no I loved it!
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My effort, I cheated a little bit… https://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/05/08/the-end/
I didn’t notice, until I re-read it again just now!
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(*grins*) Wasn’t quite certain how to tackle this prompt until my nephew tried to turn my own words against me and then I knew: http://martha0stout.wordpress.com/2014/05/08/outside-poetry-prompt-8/