Today’s prompt is to write a Haiku inspired by what you can see from the nearest window to you right now.
You might think Haiku are easy because they’re short… well they’re short, but I’m not sure they’re easy! In fact I’ve always been scared about trying them so I look forward to experimenting with you!
Haiku are short poems that use sensory language to capture a feeling or image. They are often inspired by an element of nature, a moment of beauty or a poignant experience. Haiku poetry was originally developed by Japanese poets, and the form was adapted to English and other languages by poets in other countries.
Writing a Haiku:
- In English, Haiku tend to have three lines. The first line has five syllables, the second line has seven syllables and the third line has five syllables (though some people prefer to write Haiku with fewer syllables that can be expressed in one breath).
- A Haiku usually juxtaposes two ideas separated by a line break, punctuation or space.
- Haiku use sensory language – they tend to describe rather than explain. Paint a picture with your words.
You can find some examples to inspire you here.
Feel free to interpret the brief as you see fit. I can’t wait to see what you come up with! Please paste your poem below in the comments either in its entirety, as a link or both. Take a moment to read what other people have come up with too and to leave an encouraging comment for them if you have time.
In addition to providing a daily prompt, I highlight a poem each day written by one of you. Please help to be my eyes and ears by letting me know if you read (or write) a poem that especially inspires you.
Today’s highlighted poem features on the blog Kiana Donae Poetry and was inspired by day one’s prompt – to write a poem to your teenage self: Advocating to the Teenage Me
Happy reading, happy writing -and if you do write, don’t forget to post your poem in the comments below so we can all enjoy it.
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Outside my window today:
pit pat pit pat pit
white sparkles fall from grey clouds
winter is coming
( http://wp.me/pC97a-97 )
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Beautiful – I love the changing of the seasons
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Another one about winter… *shudder* We’re just done with ours here and I’m not a huge fan. This poem, however, is lovely!
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beautiful, love it. I feel and see the weather through your haiku!
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My effort Pooky:
a cold wind blowing
winters introduction blasts
shivering inside
washing quickly dries
upon us is Autumn’s breath
slippers and warm socks
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Love this one! Find it so odd to write about winter coming, when we’re just enjoying the first glorious (mostly) weeks of spring here!
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Its what happens CC when I live opposite to you and in the future….
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Or the past… Depending on your point of view… 😉
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Hmmm…maybe…..have a good day..
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And sleep tight!
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Thank you I shall try.
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I’m in the wrong spot, but loved your poem to the teenage you. So true, you always hit the mark!! 🙂
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For some reason, it jumped out at me. Not sure I have all the technicalities though!
http://jfb57.wordpress.com/2014/05/04/parking-haiku/
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So happy you highlighted Kiana’s poetry, she is amazing! Here’s my attempt at a haiku: http://ccchampagne.wordpress.com/2014/05/04/miracle-of-spring-haiku/
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Sitting on her nest
The tom cat is on the prowl
Scrambled eggs perhaps
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I just want to purr like a cat! *smile* Nicely done!
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https://avulnerablespace.wordpress.com/2014/05/04/two-haiku-daily-poetry-prompt/
I wrote two. One to address the window view and the other inspired by today’s experiences. (link has images and further explanations).
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Tulip hearts are closed
But simply resting until
They feel the sun’s warmth
😊
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This is beautiful! xx
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Thank you! X
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I love haiku and each Thursday I write one for my lazy poet post!
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That must be a good discipline, they have always intimidated me!
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This was fun! It’s been a while since I wrote a haiku.
http://martha0stout.wordpress.com/2014/05/04/not-ready-4-poetry-prompt/
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I found it hard! I love yours.
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Thank you.
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Rhyming Haiku here – plus three more for the other prompts!
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Wow! You have been busy. I’m going to save your efforts for tomorrow as a combination of gardening and walking into a door (yes, actually) leave me ready for bed.
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Tut! Nobody told you that you’re supposed to open them before passing through? Such lack of consideration …
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I know, you’d have thought I’d picked up that essential piece of information at some point along life’s journey…
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I love your view!
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I usually write a haiku when inspired by a thought or photo, prompts usually intimidate me but what the heck,I’m feeling daring ….
Tree branches swaying
wind and rain chase homeless birds,
robins chirp with fear.
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It doesn’t sound like an intimidated haiku – I love it very much though I do hope the Robin is okay. I have a soft spot for Robins, especially if they are called Dave… https://pookypoetry.wordpress.com/2014/01/04/a-robin-called-dave-a-story-poem/
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MIne was out my car window:
There is no take-out
I must drive miles for Thai Food
Look around. Worth it!
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I love your take on this 🙂
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