A moment lived
With love and hope,
Is worth a thousand more,
Where life is just
An aching hole,
When your love is no more.
The memories
Of good times passed,
Can live for months and years,
And in them we seek solace,
As we blink away the tears.
It’s dangerous
To love too much,
We have so much to lose.
If those we love,
Leave us behind,
It’s then for us to choose…
To dwell on loss,
And misery,
And wish we weren’t apart.
Or think ourselves,
The lucky ones,
Who loved with all our heart.
[This poem is written for my dear friend Tricia, on her birthday. Tricia tragically lost both of her loves, her husband and her son and her capacity to find great joy in sharing memories of these two great men amazes me every day].
*** And here it is beautifully recorded by Karen Lee***
Memories are a source of solace when one loses a loved one. Sometimes,it is honoring a lost love to find joy in life afterward.
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That is such a wonderful way of looking at it…
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There is no loss.
Those memories are etched in the stone of time,
Not mere souvenirs.
Whether you remember or not,
Love was,
And for that time,
Love was Everything.
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Such beautiful words – thank you – I am sure that Tricia will agree with every one of them too xx
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What a beautiful poem, a wonderful gift to your friend.
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Thanks MrsT x
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Gosh, how beautifully written, recording it now and sharing with friends
K x
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Thank you karen x
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Karen, thank you so much. Your recording is beautiful.
Tricia
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I agree wholeheartedly, you did a beautiful job Karen. It means a huge amount to me too xxx
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Your words are so touching and emotive Pooky. May your friend Tricia find peace and solace (by the sounds of it she seems like a person of strength already). She is blessed to have you as a friend.
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Thank you for your kind words. Tricia is an inspiration to me and many others and a great support too. I wish she were not several continents away and I could have given her a hug rather than a poem though! x
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Absolutely stunning piece of writing, Pooky, you have such a talent with words and emotions.
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Thanks H. Your words mean a huge amount to me. I’m really enjoying my poetry challenge. I don’t know how long I’ll pursue a poem a day for… today was day 82 and I’m finding I enjoy it more and more.
xxx
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I need to learn this. I so much need to learn this.
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It’s a lesson Tricia is still teaching me… I sometimes find myself fearful of the love in my life. I’m blessed but I’m afraid of how I’d manage if I lost it…. but Tricia is teaching me that it really is better to have loved and lost. And I’ve slowly come to believe her. x
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My dear Pooky, I struggle to find words to adequately express what your precious gift of this heartfelt poem means to me.
I’ve read the poem several times, aloud as is my way, sat with it as tears of love, gratitude, memories, filled my being. And then I listened to the recording. Pooky it took the breath from my body to hear your words spoken so perfectly. I experienced a sense of being caressed by the gift of loving and being loved.
To answer the question the poem asks, YES, the giving and receiving of love is, for me, worth every moment of grief. And I do think I’m one of the luckiest women in the world to have experienced such precious unconditional love, and to have an aptitude to love with joyous abandon.
These days, because of my health, I tend to spend most of my time in one room. I laughingly refer to myself as ‘Miss Haversham with a twist’. My room is not filled with cobwebs and the stale, crumbled remains of a life unlived. My room is filled with sunshine, memories, photographs, books and bears. Yes there are days I ache with longing but there are also days I laugh with joyful gratitude for the living of a life well loved.
Pooky, I will treasure this poem all the days of my life, and when my time is done I shall ask my family for it to be read at my memorial service.
Thank you my dear friend. I love you.
Tricia xxx
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I’m sorry not to have replied before – I’m so glad that you liked this, it’s always a risk giving words as a present in case you get them wrong. It means a lot to me that it means a lot to you and I only wish I could have delivered it in person with a hug.
I love the thought of you as the alternative Miss Haversham – and I love that you are so open and honest about the ups and downs of the losses you’ve endured. You’re an inspiration and if my foray into poetry has brought me nothing else, it’s brought me you, and for that I’ll be eternally grateful. xxxx
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A truly beautiful gift — Pooky for writing it and Karen for giving a (beautiful) voice to the words. I loved it.
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Thank you. I was so impressed and moved by Karen’s take on this x
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A lovely poem Pooky and a heartfelt tribute too. Xx
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Thank you xxx
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Beautiful poem, Pooky, and a wonderful gift to your friend…her losses are heartbreaking and I can’t even imagine what she has gone through…xx
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Thank you. I was delighted that she liked the poem too. Phew! x
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Yes!
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And the points for brevity go to….
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Most beautiful!
I think loving
is definitely
worth the risk.
I think loving
as much as you can
in each moment
is worth living.
I think loving
is simple
and living
is difficult.
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I love that you wrote this as a reply to me – I saw it on your blog first and wondered if that was the case. People loved it. You’re very talented at say a lot in very few words. xxx
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*saying
(I need either sleep or caffeine…) x
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Thank YOU Pooky. Your kind words have brought tears to my eyes this morning. The first feeling for a few days. Positive feeling. Happy feeling, to remember/store/cherish and be thankful for.
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This made my day xxxx
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Man of few words. That’s probably my life motto (for better or worse)!
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🙂
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As someone much wiser than me once put it “Death leaves a heartache no-one can heal, Love leaves a memory no-one can steal” Much better to focus on the love, than the death and loss, I’m sure. This is a beautiful poem Pooky and I’m sure your friend was very touched by it.
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Thank you – I think I agree with you, but it’s been a hard viewpoint to get to. I am a sucker for really tragic books but they always fill me with fear about how I’d managed if I lost one of my most loved ones.
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