I see you,
And I long for you.
You’re going about mundane tasks,
Industrious as ever,
Impervious to my stares.
Longing fills my heart and soul,
And feels like a baby lodged there,
Kicking,
Screaming,
Dying to be let out.
I am stretched thin with longing.
It tires me.
Your voice floats across to me,
Wisps of your gentle tones
Tickle my ears,
Enter my consciousness,
Like an echo of my mind.
Lost in my thoughts,
I’m taken aback when
Suddenly you’re there.
One hand on my shoulder,
The other gently touching my hair.
You touch me softly,
But it feels electric.
Your warmth spreads through me,
Your fingertips make me whole.
And then we kiss.
You taste of longing.
And I know that,
You saw me,
And you wanted me too.
[Today’s NaPoWriMo prompt was to write a poem featuring at least three of the five senses]
OMG (sorry for the sad abbreviation)! I want this! I want this so badly! You really made me feel it with these words. Fantastic!!!
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thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Not sure if it’s exactly what the prompt was looking for but it made me try something a bit different..
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This is my first ‘proper’ visit here & my goodness- how stunning is this!! It is such an evocative love story. Brilliant!
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Thank you Julia. It’s a bit of an odd assortment here from children’s story poems to rants about mental health and all sorts..
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Wow: “And then we kiss. | You taste of longing. | And I know that, | You saw me, |And you wanted me too.” I really felt this. Deliciously good!
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Thank you Serena!
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Wonderful
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thank you x
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Moving and inspiring! I’ve never seen you write quite like this before, it’s wonderful. xx
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Thank you, I wasn’t sure how it would go down but it’s always interesting to try something a little bit different.
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I really loved this! I deleted my blog accidentally tonight, please re-follow and I’ll be reposting old poetry as well as new things!
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Oh no! How did you manage that?
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